Melody of the Night
Meeting your eyes in a busy room,
Is enough to pierce the darkening gloom,
It’s a blink in the light and I know,
That I’ve sunk down, down below,
Into the depths of my own mind,
Till I’m almost impossible to find,
It’s a cliché, I know, but I don’t care,
It’s hard enough not to stop and stare,
I live in a world in black and white,
Of a monotonous rhythm,
Of narrow sight,
You bring me the colours,
You open my eyes,
You play me the melody,
The melody of the night,
Blinking and looking away from you,
It’s something I always do,
When I hold your gaze for just,
A second longer you blush,
As do I and that’s when I know,
There’s somewhere that we could go,
It’s a common saying, eyes like pools,
I’ve never met someone where it’s so true,
I live in a world in black and white,
Of a monotonous rhythm,
Of narrow sight,
You bring me the colours,
You open my eyes,
You play me the melody,
The melody of the night,
You’re flying high above us all,
Like a shooting star,
Standing strong, standing tall,
Seeing so far,
Ahead of everyone else down here,
You know where we stand,
Show me how to conquer my fear,
Reach down and take my hand,
I live in a world in black and white,
Of a monotonous rhythm,
Of narrow sight,
You bring me the colours,
You open my eyes,
You play me the melody,
The melody of the night,
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Melody of the Night
Last edited by Katie13; 04-11-2011 at 12:19 PM. Reason: Spelt the title wrong, people...
"If you were me, then I'd be you, and if I were you, I'd hide somewhere faraway..." -
Great idea, for some reason it makes me think of a jungle at night time, the sort of rhythm of the Earth at night time, but it has wonderful, meaningful lyrics, like the lines "That I’ve sunk down, down below,
Into the depths of my own mind,
Till I’m almost impossible to find", wonderful, and also "You bring me the colours" is very good.
By the way, I think you can change the title if you click edit and then "Go Advanced". -
Ahaa!! Thank you
And I'm glad you liked it - I wrote part of it in Physics todayMaybe not the best move for my Physics grade but hey :P
It was going to be The Colours, but I decided against it. Was that right?"If you were me, then I'd be you, and if I were you, I'd hide somewhere faraway..." -
Yes, Melody of The Night is definitely suited. However, you have just made me think you could write a song about like "the colours of your heart" or something...
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Actually, do you like that idea about Colours of Your Heart? Cos if not I'll have it XD
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Hmm... let's see
You write one and I'll write one. No harm in trying
"If you were me, then I'd be you, and if I were you, I'd hide somewhere faraway..." -
Okay, sounds fun
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I wrote one, but it's more of poemy thing...
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Let's see it then!!! I've got one too, but it's definitely a song
Shall I start a new thread or just stick it here?
"If you were me, then I'd be you, and if I were you, I'd hide somewhere faraway..." -
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Thank you!!
For such a rush, it's sounding like it's alreet... :P
"If you were me, then I'd be you, and if I were you, I'd hide somewhere faraway..."