Melody of the Night

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    Katie13 said:

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    Melody of the Night

    Meeting your eyes in a busy room,
    Is enough to pierce the darkening gloom,
    It’s a blink in the light and I know,
    That I’ve sunk down, down below,
    Into the depths of my own mind,
    Till I’m almost impossible to find,

    It’s a cliché, I know, but I don’t care,
    It’s hard enough not to stop and stare,

    I live in a world in black and white,
    Of a monotonous rhythm,
    Of narrow sight,
    You bring me the colours,
    You open my eyes,
    You play me the melody,
    The melody of the night,

    Blinking and looking away from you,
    It’s something I always do,
    When I hold your gaze for just,
    A second longer you blush,
    As do I and that’s when I know,
    There’s somewhere that we could go,

    It’s a common saying, eyes like pools,
    I’ve never met someone where it’s so true,

    I live in a world in black and white,
    Of a monotonous rhythm,
    Of narrow sight,
    You bring me the colours,
    You open my eyes,
    You play me the melody,
    The melody of the night,

    You’re flying high above us all,
    Like a shooting star,
    Standing strong, standing tall,
    Seeing so far,
    Ahead of everyone else down here,
    You know where we stand,
    Show me how to conquer my fear,
    Reach down and take my hand,

    I live in a world in black and white,
    Of a monotonous rhythm,
    Of narrow sight,
    You bring me the colours,
    You open my eyes,
    You play me the melody,
    The melody of the night,
    Last edited by Katie13; 04-11-2011 at 12:19 PM. Reason: Spelt the title wrong, people...
    "If you were me, then I'd be you, and if I were you, I'd hide somewhere faraway..."
     
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    Great idea, for some reason it makes me think of a jungle at night time, the sort of rhythm of the Earth at night time, but it has wonderful, meaningful lyrics, like the lines "That I’ve sunk down, down below,
    Into the depths of my own mind,
    Till I’m almost impossible to find", wonderful , and also "You bring me the colours" is very good.

    By the way, I think you can change the title if you click edit and then "Go Advanced".
     
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    Ahaa!! Thank you
    And I'm glad you liked it - I wrote part of it in Physics today Maybe not the best move for my Physics grade but hey :P
    It was going to be The Colours, but I decided against it. Was that right?
    "If you were me, then I'd be you, and if I were you, I'd hide somewhere faraway..."
     
  4. RobberBaron said:

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    Yes, Melody of The Night is definitely suited. However, you have just made me think you could write a song about like "the colours of your heart" or something...
     
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    Actually, do you like that idea about Colours of Your Heart? Cos if not I'll have it XD
     
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    Hmm... let's see You write one and I'll write one. No harm in trying
    "If you were me, then I'd be you, and if I were you, I'd hide somewhere faraway..."
     
  7. RobberBaron said:

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    Okay, sounds fun
     
  8. RobberBaron said:

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    I wrote one, but it's more of poemy thing...
     
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    Katie13 said:

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    Let's see it then!!! I've got one too, but it's definitely a song Shall I start a new thread or just stick it here?
    "If you were me, then I'd be you, and if I were you, I'd hide somewhere faraway..."
     
  10. Hugo Zhor said:

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    Quote Originally Posted by Katie13 View Post
    Melody of the Night

    It’s a cliché, I know, but I don’t care,
    It’s hard enough not to stop and stare,
    Great lyrics. I like these lines. I love the title it´s so melodic. I like the chorus with its nice flow.
     
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    Thank you!! For such a rush, it's sounding like it's alreet... :P
    "If you were me, then I'd be you, and if I were you, I'd hide somewhere faraway..."
     

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