Frozen Flames (I think)

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    Katie13 said:

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    When the hand that you hold,
    Is cold and hard and leaving,
    When the shoulder you cry on,
    Is cold, no longer breathing,

    My breath catches in my throat,
    I try so hard to stay afloat,
    You sail away on your silver boat,
    And leave me to drown,
    Just leave me to drown,

    Oh, when your love was mine,
    But you and I ran out of time,
    I had your heart but I lost it,
    You had my heart, you still do,
    My love burned like a fire,
    Now the flame’s turned blue,

    When the words that you hear,
    Are dripping with hatred,
    When the eyes that you meet,
    Have slowly, slowly faded,

    Your heart has grown cold like stone,
    A stranger sits there upon my throne,
    Midnight wolves gnawing on my bones,
    Where you left me to die,
    You left me to die,

    Oh, when your love was mine,
    But you and I ran out of time,
    I had your heart but I lost it,
    You had my heart, you still do,
    My love burned like a fire,
    Now the flame’s turned blue,

    Frozen tears on a mask of ice,
    Shattered with your granite fist,
    The pain is deep but I pay the price,
    Haunted by our first kiss,
    You stare away over oceans wide,
    As I collapse to the floor,
    Ignore my pleadings for the sake of your pride,
    I’ll still love you ever more,

    Oh, when your love was mine,
    But you and I ran out of time,
    I had your heart but I lost it,
    You had my heart, you still do,
    My love burned like a fire,
    Now the flame’s turned blue,

    In my heart there was a fire,
    Now the flame’s turned blue,
    "If you were me, then I'd be you, and if I were you, I'd hide somewhere faraway..."
     
  2. RobberBaron said:

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    Ooh, this is good, I really like the lines, like "A stranger sits there upon my throne,
    Midnight wolves gnawing on my bones"
    Good job

    That's weird, that is actually the name of one of my stories 0_0
     
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    Katie13 said:

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    Thank you!!
    It's a good title Good images and infinite meanings
    Not that I'm being cocky...
    "If you were me, then I'd be you, and if I were you, I'd hide somewhere faraway..."