The Rising of The Fallen

the world around me, that was so great.
its falling apart, it truely cant wait.
ive found this thred, that held all together.
ive pulled, ive torn, destroyed it forever.

i cant belive i was so blind.
to not notice the darness that was right behind me.
that shadow of me that is greed.
made me selfish and corrupt with need.

it spoke, we talked, we conformed on this subject.
it poisened my coffee, with a feeling so heartless.
for the best, only time can tell.
in my future, i hope that i shall not yell.

but ive felt this feeling this feeling so great.
that all of this pain that's made my world shake.
it was a gift, something for me.
it was not for he, it was not for she.

cause for me ive never done a thing.
and i feel as, under an angel's wing.
but this wing is not a heigher being.
this wing is human, a very beautiful being.

but under this wing i feel the rain
but this rain is truely pain.
unfortuneatly, not my pain, but the tears.
the tears of my saviors, which kills.

it tears my insides into the outside.
to know that ive caused it, so ill never have lied.
i shall never lie.
for then i shall die.

cause to make my angel cry.
would make my life a lie.
so thou must comfort one another.
as to conquer the pain, the pain of each other.

to get through this hardship and find a lover.
butall i can hope, with all of my being.
that at he end of this stupid thing.
that lover... is me....

This ... MOVES ... me ... sooooo much!!!
A treasure of emotion. Purely a treasure. I just want to wrap my arms around it and shelter it till my body crumbles to dust.

This is truly something. It's got so much emotion and desperation, like you've poured out your heart. It moves along so quickly, so chaotically but at the same time it flows. I like

thank you both sooooo much, im going thru some very hard times right now, and i write when i am sad. i wrote this to tell a tale. and the bet part of the whole thing is... the last line just came true. Thank you, i will try to write another yet i have still to find the time to do so. mabye a follow up. with more happiness . but thank you.

I feel an awesome flow to this, I keep reading it and not knowing why the heck I'm not commenting? Lol this is like the fifth time! Very nice, more like Amazing, Eams. I like the poisoned my coffee part,

to not notice the darkness that was right behind me.
that shadow of me that is greed.
made me selfish and corrupt with need.
it spoke, we talked, we conformed on this subject.
it poisened my coffee, with a feeling so heartless.

So this Shadow changed your heart, huh? Hahaha I'll change it backkkkk that was my all time fav bit. I'm glad to see you back Eams I think I'm starting to remember you now

im posting my sequel now i hope we last to stand up to the evil man they call father time.

Great words my friend, and I think it's all about "we". The power of 1+1 is logarithmic. True friends gaining strength through time can do anything.