Title: Love at First Sight (tell me what you think)

have you ever had a love
that started with one look
one look and you felt your heart stop beating
one look and it feel like you were swept away by a Tsunami
couldnt think, stopped breatjing
all you could do was stare unable to look away

(chorus)
love at first sight is how we began
just one look and we were addicted
hooked so bad there was no excape
love at first sight is said to only excist in fairy tale
never thought it would happen to me
now our love story has lasted for so long
our love just burn brighter and brighter with every day
our love story began with just one look
love at first sight
(chorus end)

now everyone tries so hard to break what we have
thy're so angrey thier love can't be as strong as our
they spread thier rumors, thier lies, thier hatred
they can go on and on all they like they can't break us apart
our lives are bound togeather
if our connection break so does out bodies
survive the pain that would follow
we'd loose the will to live

chorusx2)
love at first sight is how we began
just one look and we were addicted
hooked so bad there was no excape
love at first sight is said to only excist in fairy tale
never thought it would happen to me
now our love story has lasted for so long
our love just burn brighter and brighter with every day
our love story began with just one look
love at first sight
(chorus end)

when were togeather we are whole
when we are togeather we're happier then ever before
we fight our fears togeather hand in hand
as one body, one heart, and one soul
we are two half fused into one
Universal being
we complet eachother
apart we die togeather we live a life where the sun never sets

(chorusx3)
love at first sight is how we began
just one look and we were addicted
hooked so bad there was no excape
love at first sight is said to only excist in fairy tale
never thought it would happen to me
now our love story has lasted for so long
our love just burn brighter and brighter with every day
our love story began with just one look
love at first sight
(chorus end)

Good ideas in there

I agree. I like the message - it's common but yours sounds different I like it!!

...shall I mention the millions of spelling mistakes? No? Okay then. I'll be quiet...

im a horrible speller im sry guys i cant spell at all

It doesn't really matter; it's still a good song