Sequel to: The Rising of The Fallen., i call it The Risen.

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    Eams said:

    Post Sequel to: The Rising of The Fallen., i call it The Risen.

    The pain of the one around me.
    Has become the ground beneath me.
    It has become my own pain.
    As the hater's eyes around me gain.
    I came out of the shadow behind me.
    I plead for allies in this time of crying.
    Together we've fought.
    My saviour, I sought
    As the last line of a diary.
    Comes true and glows fiery.
    The love between us has shined.
    For all hater's and allies to find.
    So i give thee an oath of true.
    I'll stand by you through and through.
    Hard-times we've been through.
    And some are still to come.
    But together we can make will home.
    A home without the eyes of hate.
    A home to keep us safe.
    No longer shall we weep alone.
    Because together we'll sleep at home.
    Forever is the challenge before us.
    But together man can beat any challenge before him.
    the only thing left,
    is the challenge of time.
     
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    Really good Eams. Knowing how hard it can be to maintain coherence and dynamics in lyrical flow, this moves really well. And btw I love the thoughts behind this too
    There is no glamour in sudden death, and nobody ever wins a war.
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    everyone thinks im so good XD im gonna start one about something and try my hardest. most of mine have been written when i am despirate, and not to the fullest. i woonder what its gonna be like.