I think it's called "A Minute Longer"

I have a question, when, for once, I write songs about how I'm actually feeling, are they better or worse than other ones? Also, any ideas for proper names?

A Minute Longer - Copyright (c) RobberBaron Enterprises 2011

[Verse]

I'm sorry, but I just can't help it,
I can't seem to let you go,
I know you'd never love me back,
I know, I know, I know

And I don't know what this means for you,
But it rips apart my soul,
I'd give it all away for you,
Cos you still make me whole

[Pre-Chorus]

When you walk out the door,
I just can't think anymore,
And I'm hoping and praying,
That you would come back

[Chorus]

Please stay for just a minute longer,
Without you I'll go insane,
And I know that you don't love me,
But I just can't deal with the pain

We used to be such good friends,
And have our heart-to-hearts,
But a heartfelt story has no glory,
When it breaks us two apart

And I don't understand why
But I know that it's true,
Oh baby: I love you

[Verse]

I know we'd be so perfect,
Together till the end,
But you don't seem to see it that way,
So why do I still pretend?

I guess I should get over you,
But still I know for sure,
I'd rather live in a dream like this,
Than live so insecure

[Pre-Chorus]

When you walk out the door,
I just can't think anymore,
And I'm hoping and praying,
That you would come back

[Chorus]

Please stay for just a minute longer,
Without you I'll go insane,
And I know that you don't love me,
But I just can't deal with the pain

We used to be such good friends,
And have our heart-to-hearts,
But a heartfelt story has no glory,
When it breaks us two apart

And I don't understand why
But I know that it's true,
Oh baby: I love you

[Bridge]

When you held me in your arms,
I thought you loved me back,
But it was only just pretend

That moment when you grabbed my hand,
I thought I was so lucky,
But now I don't want this dream to end

[Chorus]

Please stay for just a minute longer,
Without you I'll go insane,
And I know that you don't love me,
But I just can't deal with the pain

We used to be such good friends,
And have our heart-to-hearts,
But a heartfelt story has no glory,
When it breaks us two apart

And I don't understand why
But I know that it's true,
Oh baby: I love you

I love this, I love this, I love this!! Beautiful lyrics. Put together brilliantly

Thank you. This was one of my few songs from real emotions I nearly finished making the song track, but I got tired and was talking to a friend so now I've just done the chorus. I'll upload it tomorrow.

I don't feel sad anymore yay I mean, the situation is exactly the same, but I feel fine

RB I think it's easy to assume that we all (or most of us, often) write better when we write about things that we really feel, because the strength of emotions can drive us so hard. With just a little discipline we can use that emotional energy in very creative ways. And I know I can't write worth a damn unless I feel something really deep.

This starts out with a simply silky elegance and doesn't let up. I love this too

Well, you see, I always thought that my songs would be better from real emotion, but it doesn't seem to be working. How does this compare to some of my earlier works like Victory, (Can't We Just Write) A New Ending, or King of Hearts? (http://www.allthelyrics.com/forum/se...searchid=91984)