In My Mind To Discover Yourself

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  1. Eams's Avatar

    Eams said:

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    Like roads through my mind.
    Diamonds are hard to find.
    The economy goes down.
    The prices go up.
    Alike my brain waves.
    They fluxuate as do sound waves.
    They fall, they drop, they pop.
    Mine race, under pace, and crash.
    My mind is alike a road to El Dorado.
    It's a lost road, and its treasures, alike pluto.
    It's mystical, what i think is unspeakable.
    A philosopher with grace, So uncomprihendable.
    A tangled ball of yarn, frozen on a flaming pedistle.
    This ia my mind, leeching and attachable.
    These words iv'e spoke.
    On the ground like spilled coke.
    Seep into your mind, they get stuck, you cope.
    My words have been called evil, menicale, and cinacle.
    But i have found another as intelligent, and un-understandable
    I thought i was alone, i pittied them.
    But iv'e been proved wrong, i showed them.
    Three paths occur in front of me.
    I walk in the grass and show courage.
    you need not choose a path.
    But make your own.
    Be proud.
    Be you.
    The stature of a man is not decided by the size of his fists, but by how he uses them.
     
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    MoonRide*r* said:

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    This is a fine piece of work, very original (or so it seems to me) and some good twists on vocabulary. But no structure yet? Would love to see how this could play out in song
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