Hm, first post in a while.

Well I could have some pity,
but to be honest it's happening.
I don't care what you do today,
because it's not what you do it's what you say.

It drives me mad like a pack of bees,
swarming during a calmly peace,
forgetting how to act but at least,
you're still hovering over me.

No words,
no words,
can explain the way I'm sunk.
No worse,
no worse,
can be the state in which I am.
No words.

You were lost but you came around,
found your senses on the way down,
but it was too late and you were bound,
to live life in a nest every day.

Your bubble never had time to burst,
it hurts I know but it's not the worst.
You could always be in love with me,
and baby I'll tell you that's agony.

No words,
no words,
can explain the way I'm sunk.
No worse,
no worse,
can be the state in which I am.
No words.

(Ahhhh)
But in a state of sirens screaming,
and with the shrapnel of dreaming,
falling out of the sky.
You'll sit back as it goes by.
(Ohhhh)
But in the final days of rest,
before the challenge is at its best,
before it's too late.
You'll destroy what you can't create.

No words,
no words,
no words.

No words,
no words,
no words.

No words.

(Written while typing. Any thoughts?)

Anything?

This is really strong PZ, like a wrestler throwing somebody hard on the mat coz of course you write really really well and it just works. And as always it's hard to "critique" something that works so well, so I'll just say, these are my favorite lines:

You could always be in love with me,
and baby I'll tell you that's agony.

But in a state of sirens screaming,
and with the shrapnel of dreaming,
falling out of the sky.
You'll sit back as it goes by.
(Ohhhh)

Would love to hear how those lines come out in song

Thank you so much MoonRide, I can always count on you to at least give time to comment. And I think that those lines pack a big punch, myself.. Anyways, thanks.