Because I'm really not
The first two lines of the bridge were actually inspired by something I said about a chocolate fudge sunday I couldn't eat yesterday
This song is in A minor.
Still Not Over You - Copyright (c) RobberBaron Enterprises 2011
[Verse]
It's been eight days,
Or is it eight years?
It's way too long,
Since you were here
You held my hand,
And told me twice,
You'd love me forever
You said forever!
[Pre-Chorus]
Bang, bang, you shot me down,
But I'm not in the mood for messing around,
And now, now, you try to give me one more kiss,
But I guess that's one kiss I'm gonna have to miss
[Chorus]
Your love brings me alive,
So now I'm dead inside,
I wish you were here,
But I can't stand when you're near
It's over, we both know,
But I just can't seem to let go,
We can't try again, says who?
Cos I'm still not over you
[Verse]
You whispered secrets,
Told me lies,
I should've seen it,
In your eyes
I'm always wishing,
We could be,
But I still hate you,
I'm stuck on you
[Pre-Chorus]
Bang, bang, you shot me down,
But I'm not in the mood for messing around,
And now, now, you try to give me one more kiss,
But I guess that's one kiss I'm gonna have to miss
[Chorus]
Your love brings me alive,
So now I'm dead inside,
I wish you were here,
But I can't stand when you're near
It's over, we both know,
But I just can't seem to let go,
We can't try again, says who?
Cos I'm still not over you
[Bridge]
I don't think I can finish,
And I don't know how we started,
Eight days, eight years, eight centuries,
I wish we'd never parted
And now when I look at you,
It seems like you're not there,
I'm not your shadow anymore,
And frankly I don't care
You wanna place your bet?
Cos this time I'm playing hard to get
[Chorus]
Your love brings me alive,
So now I'm dead inside,
I wish you were here,
But I can't stand when you're near
It's over, we both know,
But I just can't seem to let go,
We can't try again, says who?
Cos I'm still not over you
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Last edited by RobberBaron; 04-19-2011 at 05:13 AM.
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Sad stuff... beautiful lyrics... *sniff*
"If you were me, then I'd be you, and if I were you, I'd hide somewhere faraway..." -
Yes "beautiful" RB, if "sad" can ever be called that, but of course it was the former beauty that causes the present pain.
Just one recommendation? One line, two suggestions for rhythm, altho maybe I'm not catching your word-rhythms quite right:
But I guess that's one kiss I'm gonna have to miss
But I guess that's one kiss I'll have to miss
But I guess that's one kiss I'm gonna miss
But I dunno, and it's just a small point coz I think this is really great
There is no glamour in sudden death, and nobody ever wins a war.
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Thanks for your comments
On that line, MoonRide, in the way I imagined the song I think it will fit, however thank you, I will keep that in mind for when I create the soundtrack. -
Nice, deep and great lyrics. I like these lines.
Originally Posted by RobberBaron
