This place (is the right place to be the last)

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  1. Hugo Zhor said: 04-28-2011 02:10 AM

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    Verse 1
    This place
    Is so quiet and peaciful
    Without people they can only hurt

    This grass
    Is so green and beatiful
    Without machines polluting our world

    This plain
    Is so dark covered with night
    Without lasers looking for preys

    This space
    Is so tender full of delight
    The delight that leads to railway

    Bridge 1:
    Distant sound from far away
    Has fallen on my ear

    Verse 1
    This place
    Is so quiet and peaciful
    Without people they can only hurt

    This grass
    Is so green and beatiful
    Without machines polluting our world

    This plain
    Is so dark covered with night
    Without lasers looking for preys

    This space
    Is so tender full of delight
    The delight that leads to railway

    Bridge 2:
    Tender shiver from railway
    is drawing to me here

    Chorus:
    This place
    Is going to end my past
    This place
    Is the right place to be the last
     

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    Nanashi said: 04-28-2011 03:35 PM

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    The imagery this gives me is of freedom and solitude from the "artificial" world built around us. That peace of going back to nature, for me, resonates~

    -Nanashi-

    What were you trying to convey in this? I think the same as Nanashi but I'm curious enough to ask what it was for you.

    -Joshua-
     

  3. Hugo Zhor said: 05-02-2011 02:14 AM

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    Once I was travelling by a train in the night when it stopped at a forest. I saw through a window a beatiful little meadow hidden in the forest and alight by white blue moonlight. This place was so warm and peaciful so I got a feeling if I want to commit suicide this place would be the right place to leave this "artificial" world. So I wrote these lyrics about a suicide who is comparing this beatiful place to a crazy world around him and waiting on a railway for his deliverance.
     

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    Nanashi said: 05-03-2011 02:20 PM

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    I have never traveled by train. How is the experience? You captured me at the white blue moonlight...such beautiful imagery, dear~ I hope you never do such a thing, you have a talent which would be so wasted and a life that should not depart for such a cause.. One of your other songs speaks to another side of that, yes?

    -Nanashi-
     

  5. Hugo Zhor said: 05-04-2011 08:54 AM

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    You never traveled by train?! Where are you from? In my country itīs nothing special experience to travel by train itīs like travel by bus I think. Really nice experience is travel by fast Japan shinkansen which I did. It was beautiful.
    Thank you for your care. These lyrics are about 4 years old when I was on the very threshold of a death. Now Iīm ok.