Zarex. Will be putting my rhymes here, please review

Thread: Zarex. Will be putting my rhymes here, please review

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    Zarex said:

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    Appreciate the advice man, Ill keep em coming. Finished exams so will be dropping a few verses a day ideally.
    Live a good, noble life and pay no attention as to whether gods exist. If they are just, they will judge you for your virtuous life, not your worship.
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    Default Body Bag

    ****in Houdini with the gauze, I murder without a cause
    Complex without the graph, predictions whack like crack
    I kill, never steal, feel and always deal
    The servings of dope, walkin pharmacy sellin hope
    Nevermind the rope, attachment problems back like the cloak
    Back on the bus, *****s never buss so birds should hush
    Speak through proxies, burn the fee with the bush, PUSH
    Weight, your share, falling out of place like chemo chairs
    Slippin into darkness, murky like the Loch Ness
    The monster was dead, lost ashore in red, a hell sess
    Blade in my hand like I'm Jacob fresh off Twilight (Blade the vampire)
    I'm doper than heroin soap, a GOAT whose seen the blue light
    The true light, amplifying artifacts of true might
    To who might, gaze into this ball and see the few nights
    I do right, Claus can't leave witnesses, its bad for businesses
    Live a good, noble life and pay no attention as to whether gods exist. If they are just, they will judge you for your virtuous life, not your worship.
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    Zarex said:

    Default Chicken Dinner

    Goes with Copkiller instrumental. Copkiller by Mellowhype ft. Earl Sweatshirt

    [Verse 1]
    I never hate, always rebate or reciprocate
    Favors, not Kate plus the flavor comes late
    Too late, I'm here bringing fear, concentrate my dear
    Concentrate like orange jews/juice, adolf simpson, better cheer
    Slash victims with the butcherknife, change names like wed wife
    Skip town, skip school for the colored pool fight
    Tonight, comes the culmination of the flight
    Meet the victim, screams fall short like midget screenlight
    Heed warnings, I'm killin you all with rings, good morning
    War zone like Jordan, feel 'portant when they're mourning
    More sent, fools riddle Jews, don't make sense
    Meanwhile my ghouls sell my dimes like I make cents
    You're past tense, imperfect like you failed to climb the fence
    Clench ya jaw, the paw smash is heaven sent
    Hell bent on ridiculing, yet I'm straight dull edge
    Bell sent like those talkin dolls, lost like u turn and there's the ledge

    [Verse 2]
    Gifted like Jesus left me under Christmas trees left
    Out South, heft a pound of this dope, chin cleft
    So I'm super, down ur **** like lumpas
    Silent like a puma, on ya feet, playin Zuma
    No humor, I chop the bodies up so heats 'sup
    Cup a breast like its KFC, may I see ur license bub
    Abuse power an hour after the Sarge called me in
    Rollin in my filth, Pink sink like the blood's dim
    Goddamn, Juneyah lost the cipher, smash the typewrita
    Hoov Dam, stop ya flow, kill the cypher, go fasta
    **** **** up like anal in the airplane
    My plane, we dnt intersect, ur slow like biplanes
    Not on my level, moved away from the bevel
    Matter fact, buried u deep so bellow while this shovel
    Smashes rocks like I'm preppin crack, mute u like young Jak
    The fact is I'm untouchable, high alt Banshee Jack


    WHOOOOO put some obscure mother****ing references in this **** but I love it, cannot wait till I get my equip so I can show u how I flow it and my other ****.
    Live a good, noble life and pay no attention as to whether gods exist. If they are just, they will judge you for your virtuous life, not your worship.
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    Zarex said:

    Default Crooked

    Goes with All Caps Instrumental(http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=w7owRnwkut8)

    not finished, i plan to put 8 or 16 more bars in, here are 8 bars, quick write
    Starts at the end of 0:21 so i guess 0:22, when the beat changes at 0:21 is when it starts

    Paper beats rock so Dwanye gets locked in bars by foes
    Sure he had his high and lows, pills help for poppin those
    Cue my entrance like a deaf bit*h you enterin slow
    Go my only speed so indeed I’m hittin does all fours
    I’m the second so don’t waste a second tastin stew
    The hottest bowl runs thicker than blood of ancient trees I slew
    ..some new shi* indicate that sap ain’t blood, who knew?
    Basically, Pa don’t flow, if he do: it sleuth, no booth
    My raps got me off planes like cities callin names
    Bring change like Jews, you snooze, I make news, daily LAMES
    MCs don’t register like they masked at registers
    The expert, shoot necks to be sure, not my hemisphere
    Killin these niaa*s, Grand Dragon and my Jake Long
    She call you Wei Wong, got you thinkin that the time’s wrong
    Me? For free, I get that shi* up ‘gainst screens like ‘motes for Wii
    “Not cheating, I’m the one” I tell hun, then smash them cheeks
    Live a good, noble life and pay no attention as to whether gods exist. If they are just, they will judge you for your virtuous life, not your worship.
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    Bump so u kids can see this treasure
    Live a good, noble life and pay no attention as to whether gods exist. If they are just, they will judge you for your virtuous life, not your worship.
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    Zarex said:

    Default Sleepy Hollow (JR & Rose)

    Collab I did with another crew member, Rose

    [Smell of booze fills the air as ni*gas yell in unison, watching the TV attached to the ceiling.]

    [Rose]
    So im sitting here drinking beer with my bit** at my side
    feeling darker then a ni*ger adding tint to my ride
    empty bottles get me mad cause i lost all my hope
    I’d refill but these pills cost so im outta dough

    [Jr]
    Trippin on the liqour, finna burn my trees like Wicker
    This bit** infront of me thicker than blood between ni*gas
    So I might as well just grab her, plan to jab ‘er with my dagger
    Im a rapper, fu** her man, bouta pull a Fonda, Jagger

    [Rose]
    who the fu** is this freddy cruger faggot on the bar
    looks like maggots got attracted to his face then had a war
    your breath smells like sh**, sh** talkers make me hurl
    so pogostick your as* to the front and jump up off my girl

    [Jr]
    Freddy Kruger? Better weep, this ain’t a dream, your soul I’ll keep
    And your bit**, stuffed in the Jeep. Charming sweep her off her feet
    Crack ur sh**, reverse Norton. Trust me, no one is mourning
    And by the morning, ur a vampire, to dust, ill send u soaring

    [Rose]
    we both vampires… i suck up pus** and you suck up the di**
    yeah you fu**ing up the game because you suck your scripts
    ill grab this bar stool and charge fools, scar ghouls with hard tools
    the bar dule is far too hard too smash then rawr through

    [Jr]
    I’m a vampire, flowin like the blood out ur entire neck
    Red like Beck, think u got me cornered? But its only check
    Leave ur wincin, call it gout. No R, so why the pout?
    Can’t touch me, kin to trout. Broke your bars, run from the South

    [Rose]
    i smash this beer in your face and watch the glass splatter
    i dont give a fu** its fag backwards you look like mad hatter
    couldnt find a rap badder adding retarted crack rappers
    your whack standers suck as* you fag bastard

    [Jr]
    Straight edge as a closet fag, slice or jab?
    Bag this cat. Top hat plus axe, feel the wrath
    End this sh** like south seccession, the lesson is count your fu**ing blessings
    Give you a chance like its New York, dont question my slight regression

    [Rose]
    ruff you up with my connections, stuff you up like bad congestion
    collections of bodys lessen, in basements made for conventions
    your dead body gives affection your flesh ill give my attention
    im here to make an suggestion talk sh** then bring protection
    Live a good, noble life and pay no attention as to whether gods exist. If they are just, they will judge you for your virtuous life, not your worship.
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    Zarex said:

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    bumppppp
    Live a good, noble life and pay no attention as to whether gods exist. If they are just, they will judge you for your virtuous life, not your worship.
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    Zarex said:

    Default Collateral (unfinished)

    Running from the pigs, I’m beat like average asians
    Salvage what I can like theres a Japanese invasion
    *****, forget the pearls, **** swirls if you misbehaving
    Yo, I’m pretty sick but my shaman gettin patients

    Kill em, never leave prints, neighbors say I’m Godsent
    Never once suspect a cereal/serial killer like kids Lent
    In retrospective, the most effective method of entry is to claim I’m tryna fix the vent
    Reveal myself like evil Kent

    Enough of slayings, how should I protude?
    Raise my fist in gratitude? Head on back to servitude?
    Ignorant proctor, leave em red, call the doctor
    Narcs’ll sing like its opera, but waving bacon’ll stop her

    My tombstone says bless you, take it how you feel
    AoX kill them all, team of 6 like Navy Seal
    *pause*
    If you don’t like how it feel then try to lubricate like jeel/jail
    Live a good, noble life and pay no attention as to whether gods exist. If they are just, they will judge you for your virtuous life, not your worship.
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    Zarex said:

    Default Collateral (done)

    [Verse 1]

    Running from the pigs, I’m beat like average asians
    Salvage what I can like theres a Japanese invasion
    *****, forget the pearls, **** swirls if you misbehaving
    Yo, I’m pretty sick but my shaman gettin patients

    Kill em, never leave prints, neighbors say I’m Godsent
    Never once suspect a cereal/serial killer like kids Lent
    In retrospective, the most effective method of entry is to claim I’m tryna fix the vent, its bent
    Reveal myself like evil Kent

    Enough of slayings, how should I protude?
    Raise my fist in gratitude? Head on back to servitude?
    Ignorant proctor, leave em red, call the doctor
    Narcs’ll sing like its opera, but waving bacon’ll stop her

    My tombstone says bless you, take it how you feel
    AoX kill them all, team of 6 like Navy Seal
    *pause*
    If you don’t like how it feel then try to lubricate like jeel/jail

    [Interlude]

    If I mailed this ****
    It would get redirected

    [Verse 2]

    AoX tell em next up, next up, dealt with like you fessed up
    Bodies stacked like ice, no sets thrown so give up
    Peeped the squat house, now the witness there a sitting duck
    Watched the judge house, ***** scorned like a minor ****

    Last up, last up, free to go like Jackson
    Chains drop down, hope the ***** sings like Jackson
    9 to your back, strapped kid, brought a towel
    Never mind the pool, Jules standing watch like owl

    Grab the bat *****, where the ***** at?
    Real ****ing dark, waves show the ditch, clap
    Swiper stop, need those stars to run laps
    Finish up the track, traffick that, I relapse

    Junior rip out ya vocal cords, you ****ing Renzi
    You talk **** bout my Word and I’ll smite thee
    Trigger happy love, ***** met his life partner
    Ed never lose, stuck in theather watch past rappers
    Live a good, noble life and pay no attention as to whether gods exist. If they are just, they will judge you for your virtuous life, not your worship.

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