
Originally Posted by
MoonRide42
Very nice Hugo, it's a great theme and it takes me back to my hometown too.
How many times
I left this town
´cos I felt it would
Squeeze me
And drown me
In its concrete mud
Great chorus, and to me it seems to get right to the heart of it.
May I suggest just "sightseeing memories"? No prepositional needed, just a simple (noun)-predicate-object would be fine, and maybe even preferred by native-English speakers.
However, I know and love two songs (by Gigi D'Agostino and Savage) where the English is not typical but the songs are great, and the lyrics are endearing in their own way, so in the end it's always your preference
