Foxy Roxy

Hey guys I'm new to the forum , just wanted to get your opinion on a few lines of lyrics of a song I'm working on.

I normally write really deep songs , love songs or songs with meaning but I'm trying something new , this song is not lyrically the best it's a bit wacky I was influenced by David Bowles rebel rebel so it's a little wacky.

The meaning of the song is a hot girl who is sexy as hell but also abit of a ***** that is basically not marriage material, here it's goes just a few lines it might he hard for you to find a tune but try, as I said it's got a very David bowie singing style to it.

Your looking sexy and your looking hot
Your skimmpy shorts and your see through top
Your not a pearl kind of girl if you know what I mean

You get attention from all of the guys
But I don't mind cos I know that your mine
But you drive me CRAZY most of the time
You drive me CRAZY i have to keep you in sight
You drive me CRAZY but when you flutter those eyes
I Change my mind and realise your one of a kind

Chorus:
Foxy Roxy , your not the marrying type
Foxy Roxy , your the girl my mum don't like
Foxy Roxy , not matter what you maybe
Your All ways Foxy Roxy to meeee.

It works for me, nice roll on the word flow. David Bowie? Last song I heard by him was Let's Dance but I remember Rebel Rebel. But thinking back to that era, with these lyrics, Steve Miller keeps crashin my brain