Trying To Find Her Way

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  1. carlym99 said:

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    What do you think of the following lyrics?


    All made up and dressed to impress
    So many thoughts put into all the effort, she almost wants to regress
    But such readiness and preparation of the excitement has enhanced
    One last breath upon waiting for the night arrive leads to the hope of romance

    The anticipation becomes stronger and the hopes intensifies
    While the starry night skies flicker above and seemingly magnifies
    The music in her head builds, the beats become faster
    And her heart becomes so intense it is soon filled with joy and laughter

    Unfortunately such a story of hope, love, and happy endings is just myth
    She still believes in herself…that her hopes, dreams and visions will come to exist
    She damningly lives her day with the thought of life and love in mind
    But she will soon realize that her perfect story, she will ultimately never find

    Finally sick of the cancellations and tired of all the lies
    It’s become no wonder or even a question that all she wants to do is hide
    Reasons and motives of excuses are taken into consideration
    But at the end day,…the person she thought she trusted is be guilty of lies and manipulations.

    And still, she tries so hard to find her way
    To find that special someone to find one day
    And ultimately the unwanted and undesired denial and failures is cast upon her life
    Which causes her to wonder, why must I go through all this ****, when I’ve already been through so much strife?
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    MoonRide*r* said:

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    Good writing, it works the mind, but what genre and style? Just need something to try to anchor it to ...
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