I made some lyrics for a song i want to create and i want to hear some reviews

So here are the lyrics:
Damn this pain i can't stop feel
Damn thi hell that can't be real
All the dreams in my head
Seems to reach their end
Damn this walls around of me
Damn this cage that i can't break free
Lost my fate long ago
Nothing real anymore

Staying here alone
Feeling like i've been here before
Watching as the days come and go
Feeling like i've been here before

All my memories seem to fade
Nothing left of what i felt
Say goodbye to yesterday
Time goes by in another way
After all this years i look back
Seeing the mistakes i made
Trying to forgive myself
But i don't know if i can

Staying here alone
Feeling like i've been here before
Watching as the days come and go
Feeling like i've been here before

They are not finish yet. So please tell me what do you think. Are they ok? Also they are made from the heart not just some lyrics i made just for fun.

In the second line you can say "feeling" on the end and it'll be just fine. Nice lyrics, good form, sounds fine to me.