Hi. This is the first time I post my lyrics for reviewing. Thanks in advance for any constructive critics or helpful suggestions!

© 2011 by Nicolas Paradis

Context: Kind of a basic break up song.
Genre: Progressive/Alternative Rock

[Verse 1] (Guitar: Clean w/ Reverb & Chorus)

On that plane I have
Plenty of time to think
About what made you lose
Confidence in our affinity

When I do the math
It sums all up against me
I should've open my book
When you still wanted to read

I'm not a big fan of regrets
But this time I fear
I really missed the chance
To share parts of my life

Should I try
To get this back?


[Chorus 1] (Guitar: Mild Overdrive)

I'm running throught my mind
On flight 608
Unsuccessfully trying to find
How to explain my mistakes

Words keep hiding from my
Ability to write
What would it possibly be
If you were in front of me?


[Verse 2] (Guitar: Clean w/ Reverb & Chorus)

The woman beside me
Is going to Chicago
To get her husband's body
He died from a stroke

Will I ever have
Someone to come take me
When I'll pass away
And my body wouldn't make it home

What's the point, anyway?

You could just
Leave me there
Alone in peace


[Chorus 2] (Guitar: Mild Overdrive)

I carefully filtered the
Story of my past
You didn't need to know
Every detail that fast

Did as if you were blind
Locked my feelings into crate
Made sure you won't find a way
To reach over the key


[Bridge/Solo] (Guitar: Clean w/ Reverb & Delay following by Heavy Disto as the solo progresses)
Instrumental

I will try
To get this back!


[Chorus 3] (Guitar: Mild Overdrive)

Keep running throught my mind
On flight 608
Hopefully trying to find
How to explain my mistakes

Words keep hiding from my
Ability to write
What will it possibly be
When you'll be in front of me?

Shouldn't have filtered the
Story of my past
I guess you need to know
If I want it to last

You're obviously not blind
As you cracked open my crate
It would not have gone away
If I had given you the key