Cross the line

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  1. Hugo Zhor said:

    Default Cross the line

    Chorus:
    Iīve crossed the line as you say
    Itīs just your phrase and I donīt care
    Iīll do it again if I want
    Itīs my life and not yours!

    I have lost something precious
    And everything comes down
    It seems now even my life
    Is lost and never found

    Iīm riding on my way home
    And tomorrow daily sh*t
    Iīm on my way to nowhere
    Now itīs time to stop it

    Bridge 1:
    And fly
    Leaving all behind
    And cross the line

    Chorus:
    Iīve crossed the line as you say
    Itīs just your phrase and I donīt care
    Iīll do it again if I want
    Itīs my life and not yours!

    Shiny paradise along
    Waiting for me to come
    Forbidden fruits and pleasures
    No one will leave undone

    Iīm riding on coloured dream
    Donīt care of their saying
    Iīve crossed the line tonight
    Dream your dream before your TV!

    Bridge 2:
    I fly
    Nothing matters tonight
    And cross the line

    Chorus:
    Iīve crossed the line as you say
    Itīs just your phrase and I donīt care
    Iīll do it again if I want
    Itīs my life and not yours!
    Last edited by Hugo Zhor; 07-05-2011 at 07:28 AM.
     
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    SK'nDeep said:

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    Another one that is *****ing Awesome....lay these down on some audio. I'm not kidding you have massive tallent man...

    Great job again...


    could I make a suggestion though.
    I think this song should be called

    Boundaries.... Maybe have a spot somewhere in there where you scream it. in rage...
    Peace Love Empathy

    Sk'nDeep
     
  3. Hugo Zhor said:

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    Thank you again SKīnDeep. About audio I canīt play any instrument on it (guitar, bass, drums), so no audio. Youīre right itīs fast agressive metal song with screaming parts in rage!
    But I think you can use these lyrics. Lay down some audio maybe in rap or what is your kind of music. Because itīs great about lyrics you can use them in different styles!
     
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    SK'nDeep said:

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    You are correct. Lyrics are such a beautiful thing. If any I would try to market your song writing for bands and stuff like that. I would hate to see great lyrics like that go to waste.
    Peace Love Empathy

    Sk'nDeep
     
  5. Hugo Zhor said:

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    Ok. You can try market my song writing. Good luck.