poem might become a song {help}

Thread: poem might become a song {help}

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  1. Patty Nicole Lillard said:

    Default poem might become a song {help}

    girls talk about boys
    boys talk about sports
    girls talk about clothes
    boys talk about cars
    while i contemplate life it goes on and never slows
    i get a worry line on my brow while everyone passes me by
    my feelings are jumbled and as i keep stumbleing
    no hand comes to steady me no arms to hold me
    my lesson for you is love and expectations are dangerous
    fairytales are just unreal dreams that people desire
    as the gray fog covers my mind i get hazy
    and as i close my eyes
    i feel my very soul being pulled from my body
    and put in a jar to show the world i am real

    girls gossip boys fight
    popularity is exclusive while outcasts are an open thing
    people see through me like i'm a glass figurine there in the sunlight
    never moving or changing never feeling or saying what i think
    people laugh and joke at others expense never thinking of the consequences
    like people becoming outcasts
    feelings hurt and as people pull away life becomes a living hell
    for as they leave they forget who they were before
    they become the very thing they were running from
    some stay and fight the pain to act like stone an unfeeling thing
    but it takes time and strength that is hard to find
     

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