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  1. Erica1997 said:

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    Just a little piece of some possible lyrics... tips?

    Your so wrong,
    but babe you feel so right.
    when I'm with you,
    nothing else crosses my mind,
    I need you with me,
    I need you all the time.
    I know it's wrong,
    but baby I could swear it's right,
    from the way I feel tonight,
    everything's alright.

    Age is just a number,
    it doesn't cross my mind,
    but in this town,
    people talk all the time.
    I swear it's hard,
    but it's all I can do,
    just to keep my eyes off of you.
     
  2. Hugo Zhor said:

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    I like it. Itīs great idea. Verse "Age is just a number" reveals all. I think you should call it "Age is just a number" and write chorus about this verse. Great one. Carry on!