Hello everyone, this is my first ever song that I wrote, but I need opinions and improvements ( if theres any ) so yeah, please say if its good bad and why and what to do to make it better so yeah, here it is:

Chorus
Girl, Girl,Girl,
I really like you
Girl, Girl, Girl
I really love you
Girl, Girl, Girl
I want you to be mine
Girl, Girl, Girl

Verse 1
I see you walking down that corridor
Your smile is really worth fighting for
Your beautiful beautiful blue eyes
I don't ever ever wanna see them cry
So girl... Please give me a chance
I'll take you to the south of France
Take you to the moon and back
Come on girl, lets go and pack

(Chorus)

Verse 2
Hey girl, your so gorgeous
My love for you is so enormous
I just want to make you so so happy
Please girl, just don't get snappy
I wanna be with you forever
Would I want to lose you,um, never
I'd treat you like a Queen
Don't worry, I'm no Charlie Sheen

(Chorus)

Verse 3
Words can't explain how much I love thee
We could extend our family trees
What are you thinking?
Are you liking my winking?
I can be your guiding light
Even when you sleep at night
Girl, lets start a romance
So... Please give me a chance?

(Chorus) x2

END
Please help, thank youu