be with you-{feedback plzz}

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  1. cyvan said:

    Default be with you-{feedback plzz}

    The world stopped to spin around
    By the time I heard a sound
    The sound of your voice
    Then it was up to me to make the choice

    The choice to chase you
    But I didn’t knew what I had to do
    Someone like you
    Wouldn’t be long alone

    in this world
    when everything is lonely
    and everything is only
    a dream or a nightmare
    I didn’t say I care
    As long as I am with you
    And I hope you think like that too

    Then you ask to come along
    I thought ok, because here wasn’t anything going on
    So I went to you
    And I was feeling like I get the flue
    When I leave you

    in this world
    when everything is lonely
    and everything is only
    a dream or a nightmare
    I didn’t say I care
    As long as I am with you
    And I hope you think like that too

    The next day I saw you
    I still didn’t knew if I could chase you
    In all my dreams
    I got you
    In all my nightmares
    I lost you
    So I got to chase you

    in this world
    when everything is lonely
    and everything is only
    a dream or a nightmare
    I didn’t say I care
    As long as I am with you
    And I hope you think like that too


    Then you gave me a hug
    I was like please don’t interrupt
    Cuz I liked it
    And I fight for it
    And I will fight for you
    And I hope you will love me too


    someone see a point that he/she think it could be better??
     

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