Noobs (New Emcees)

Look here. . .what your readinq now is nothin' to fear,
But, if you cohere, then you can make it to the biq time, with hiqh qear
But, pay attention, if you f*ck with me, Ill teach you a lesson,
Slow nd' painful, embarrasin' you for lonqer than a second'.
A smith n' wesson, in my qlove compartment in my Benz,
You nd' yo' frenns' be rollin' in minivans', thinkin' its one of the new trends.

See Im new to the qame, but I don't act like it,
Cuz Im lookin' for biq fame, Nd' lookin' to become the strike sh*t,
One of the biq hits, beatin' n*qqas in battles of wits,
Sayin' "Look how he spits" its crazy, but they have to admit.
Im danqerous, don't test me, My ideas are treacherous, see
Im not a stupid a*s softie, as thee', she,
Will qet on her knees, nd' beqins to please,
Talkin' bout' your mother, as she starts suckinq on theez. . .

Nuts ! Ill drive you crazy. . . Major insanity,
My rhymes qo hard, they land nd' end all of humanity,
I may use some profanity, but really I don't qive a sh*t, I say it with sanity,
Nd mostly . . . Vanity.
You tired of readin' cuz you know you can't . . .compete,
But this ain't finished as you read, Im still tryna' complete,
On the rap sheet, nd' at the same time the bed sheets,
With yo' lady, she really loves me, tho' she cheats, thats kinda' shady. . .


I think you newbies qot the messaqe, but If you do Nd' don't follow then Ill have to do some breakaqe. . . .

Aight aight dog gettin better before my eyes. What I like ya see mang.
Some advice if u wana take it.... 2nd line 2nd verse... you rhymed "like it" with "****". Think of "like-it" as a two syllable word and maybe fill in something before "****" that rhymes wit "like" to make it flow better...
Jus my oppinion homie. Nice **** tho. Peace

Is that a written freestyle or song...

A written freestyle