I wrote this a few months ago its kind of a very soft rock or country rock song
Think of it as a male/female duet. I'm currently working on the music.

I'll Hold Your Heart In My Soul
(c) Slim Cahill

It seems our walks take a bit longer
ev'n though they're much shorter
and a simple task seems to get harder
with every year gone past.. but I don't care

Cuz when I look into your eyes
I can see that same twinkle that I've known for many years
and know that my love for you will never die
and If tomorrow should ever end I just want you to know
I'll still hold your heart in my soul

I can't sing to you like i used to
and I can't dance much anymore
and when my bones seem to hurt more
with each step Its a task.. but I don't care


(B)
If I can't hold your hand anymore
If I can't say a single word and
If tomorrow should ever end I just want you to know
I'm still holding your heart in my soul


Cuz when I look into your eyes
I can see that same twinkle that I've known for many years
and know that my love for you will never die
and If tomorrow should ever end I just want you to know
I'll still hold your heart in my soul

(Instrumental Bridge)

It seems our walks take a bit longer
ev'n though they're much shorter
and a simple task seems to get harder
with every year gone past ...but I don't care

Cuz when I look into your eyes
I can see that same twinkle that I've known for many years
and know that my love for you will never die
and If tomorrow should ever end I just want you to know
I'll still hold your heart in my soul

I think it's beautiful =] I love male and female duets, it's so sweet x

I think this is very good too. We old farts should get some air time besides the fart part (sorry, it just came out - sorry again).
Anyway, it really does satisfy a sincere sentimentality. One thing, for me though, is that the part when the bones hurt and can't dance much any more.
Maybe it could be a little less invalid sounding. It really gave me pause and the song would either get humorous at that point or it would start to hurt
and fall to it's knees. Old farts dance - they might creak a little. Really you could still use the dance but make it more like we do slow dancing more than
we like to .... something.
Thanks for sharing your stuff. You have talent, I believe.

SkylarNicole, Thank you I'm glad you liked it....wait till you here it.

ironynotlost, Thank you sir, lol on "old farts dance". It was a neighbor I had when I was a kid in the old neighbor hood.> " and when my bones seem to hurt more
with each step Its a task "