I've been hurting for such a long time
For no one don't even care but you
I've been wondering where would I be in the end
Waiting to see if I get through
Chorus
This isn't me
Makes you wonder why I'm here
This isn't me
Keeps me thinking, would this pain disappear
This just isn't me no way
I've been trying to hold on much longer
To find that place that I need right next to you
I've been working hard to get stronger
In many ways just got to do what I got to do
Chorus
I've been all around in many directions
Making many paths to try to get things right
But I had realized that your love
With me can make corrections
Chorus
© 2011 Chris McKnight
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This Isn't Me
Last edited by chrismcknight; 11-10-2011 at 05:53 PM.
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I quite like the emotion of this, and I really like the second verse. But someitmes the flow is hard to follow and your lines sometimes need tweaking a bit - such as "Waiting to see would I get through" would be better if "would" were "if" - but that might just be me!! :P
Overall, I quite like this! Good job"If you were me, then I'd be you, and if I were you, I'd hide somewhere faraway..."