ok.i titled it spit it hard.it's pretty random but i'm tryin' to find out what i should rap about later in life...
(i'm 14.expect some naivete x])
alright yo yo
i can buy the first lady credit card swipe Haiti,
spit it hard like Shady got an arm like Brady,
and maybe they'll pay me 80 bucks an hour just to shower,
sweet and sour from my tower make the *****es feel my power,
i'm a plower sniffin' flower snortin' pollen *****es callin',
on the move no stallin' over all and i stay ballin',
i be fallin' through my money,
sweet as honey nose is runny,
cuz i'm illy really chilly,
float in green like pick-a-dilly,
ya feel me?like hill billy growin' dope in my floor,
no Charmin ultra,***** more IS the more,
door-to-door sellin' por lok' i'm a drug store,
more spice galore the mushrooms and spores,
open wide and the weed is gonna pour right out of,
my mouth so don't snitch cuz my info stay in yo,
home window,my intro's confidential,
i said it and i meant so geeked up no mental,
so much $green mint i go and make it fundamental,
in uno momento i'll have more cars than Leno,
not too gentle fizzle up like coke and mentos,
kill a n!qqa for his b!tch now she is the widow,
still suck ge-ni-tals lit-tle by little,
she licks on my pickle smooth and not brittle,
after she dribbles she slurps the popsicle,
make my deposit of these two hot nickels,
it tickles,just like the ice on my ear,
look here it's clear shine like a chandelier,
sheer beast no three 6 never need that refix,
want to be me b!tch hop on that Wii Fit,
get double D tits just for a prefix,
cuz me spit is LEE-git a pledge to allegiance.
tell me how i did,what i need to work on,if it's too negative,etc.
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rate this rap ( there' no apparent subject)
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I dig the first half.. you kind of loose me from the half way point to the ending.. LOL at the charmin line nice haha.. overall pretty good
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Im guessing you listen to lil wayne/young money? you have a similar style with all the boasting and metaphors
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well actually that's the thing that's weird.i dont like little wayne or young money.i'm more of an Eminem kind of guy and though i don't want to copy his style,i just can't find a way to spit like him....
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lol yeah i got that a lot from people at my school but like i said:the rap's pretty random x]
Originally Posted by RusKazVan
