half done rap 'feat who maybe'

I'm still manic
And if this is rap I'm still a addict
Through this Axis light and dark panic

The flip side of the coin
Rip out loins
Terror filled with enjoin

The legend of Who to infuse with Titans
The two who use patterns to confuse and frighten
You're head squeezed feeling you're skull tighten

Nothing can take me higher or stop my desire
The darkest soul I grow more dire
Black flames cannot feed my darkest fire
The black tide is the required
Trip on blooded wires

I sting like sea-salt
My venom rips flesh in exalt
Kills all by default

I terrorized the wicked
Rip the storms flesh, the one they call sickened
I leave the darker than death stricken

My talents are wickedly split
Other rappers are like lickity ****

I break rappers down who got something to prove
Face to face, you're skill I disapprove

It's not rapping.
you're lacking in snap, and that's gagging.
Just.. ~ ..la la laughing from this active assassin.
Your just ~ bla bla blapping and acting sure absurd,
Just a ~ 'rap addict' cracking, so - eat your worst words.

Sick of ~ adding and asking you to 'bring something betta'.
Big stuff ~ 'crafting' and "slapping"s like gunflints to berettas ~
Different categories; the sadder story's this stinking 'smegma'
Nasty, 'for"e!"skin' - ...definition's extra...

neither is wat you just posted mines better than that

Originally Posted by Deleterious

neither is wat you just posted mines better than that

Shadow's rebel cloud settles down opposite the sun,
Hallowed metal crowns like treble sounds off of his gun.

How though?
Just a shackled 'black' gown of sun-flux.
Or could this brown nosed ground pose expose more than sun plush?

Dumb luck, you've strayed into the shadow of sin friend.
Have your head at the gallows with a raalow to harrow an end.
My text leaves you sallow like a fat shot of heroin - an salvos leave a shallower count of your keratin.

Embarrassing, but merits bring some 'wit' to the punch,
You wear a ring but dont care one sh*t about love.
A married thing ~ 'unweddable'. I'm paired with this stuff.
I love the game - you f*ck it so incredibly much.

I'm not respecting that ~ if I can't correct that I'm rowdy...
And you'd best lay down in my skidmarks when pulled 'Audi'.
I could embark an spin bars all over the county,
While I hit hard, you're out getting rigged hard an drowsy..