help with lyrics

I am a lyricist and I need to find someone that will colaborate with me on the composition of the music. Here are some lyrics. Let me know what you think.

People say that there are seven wonders in the world.
I say there is only one, which is a very beautiful girl.
She walked into my life a few months ago.
After the first date, I never wanted to let her go.

She makes me happy every day.
That's only half of what I want to say.
I care for her deep in my heart.
Which I know is a good start.