You're Not The Girl

Sorry doesn't mean anything anymore,
Stop knocking on my damn door,
Put the phone down and turn away,
Because our time was yesterday,

Yesterday was here and gone,
You and I've sung our last song,
Now living in silence, what happened to all the laughter,
Once upon a time doesn't always end in happily ever after,
The flame of our love used to burn so bright,
But the winds too strong I can't see the light,
Now the tides too high and wave are crashing down,
I tried to hold on but our love began to drown,
Now lost at sea,
There's no hope for you and me,
I just hope one day I wake up from this dream,

We're done, goodbye, there's nothing left to say,
I'm sorry but that's how it is, it's gotta be this way,
You're not the girl who you used to be,
You're not the girl who fell in love with me,
Sorry doesn't mean anything anymore,
Stop knocking on my damn door,
Put the phone down and turn away,
Because our time was yesterday,

Don't look in the past, too many mistakes were made,
Time heals all, the memories will soon fade,
Eventually you'll forget all about me,
Because apparently I'm not who you want me to be,
In the past a knight in shining armor, now just a peasant,
But you think you're still the princess here in the preset,
So take your crown and ride out of town,
But when I become king don't think you can turn back around,

We're done, goodbye, there's nothing left to say,
I'm sorry but that's how it is, it's gotta be this way,
You're not the girl who you used to be,
You're not the girl who fell in love with me,
Sorry doesn't mean anything anymore,
Stop knocking on my damn door,
Put the phone down and turn away,
Because our time was yesterday,

Now all that's left are your voices that echo through my head,
And the empty space that lays next to me in my bed,
Do I wish things were different, sure,
But me and you are no more,
So it's time to say goodbye once and for all,
But remember the words I said before you try to call,

We're done, goodbye, there's nothing left to say,
I'm sorry but that's how it is, it's gotta be this way,
You're not the girl who you used to be,
You're not the girl who fell in love with me,
Sorry doesn't mean anything anymore,
Stop knocking on my damn door,
Put the phone down and turn away,
Because our time was yesterday.

It's catchy but frightfully cliche... I'm unsure of the genre, though and this could easily impact on the "clicheness" of the lyrics. If it's pop or pop-rock then I would endorse it 100%, but any other genre not necessarily. In regards to subject matter, I know that feel bro, and I can sympathise, so it's certainly working for me! I'm not a fan of the chorus being the length it is repeated three times but this is only a minor structural flaw. Otherwise, you have the ability to write songs, now only to refine them

wow, good to be back on this forum. First, nice song. My GF broke up with me 2 days ago, but I'm trying to save it. I don't know why, I just love her. She still loves me and I know it.

Thanks for taking time to read it, I appreciate it.