Title: Just One Night

Few years have gone bye
I look upon your face
The rest of the world fades away
The sun says goodbye, the moon says hello
I lie awake thinking only...of you

(chorus)
Just one night
Is all i ask
Just you and me no one else
Your hand in mine
Just one night
So i can look upoon you, and forget the world
Hold you close in a dance
For just one night
I wanna hear your voice fill the night, like the owls do
just you and me for one night
just one...niiight
(chorus end)

For sometime I thought
It's only Fruatuation, I'll move on in time
Yet it's not your beauty I've fallen for
It's everything else one cannot see
You're so far out of my leage
Yet I still try
If i can't have you, then I only have one wish

(chorusx2)
Just one night
Is all i ask
Just you and me no one else
Your hand in mine
Just one night
So i can look upoon you, and forget the world
Hold you close in a dance
For just one night
I wanna hear your voice fill the night, like the owls do
just you and me for one night
just one...niiight
(chorus end)

You may or may not feel the same
Doesn't matter to me, I can't stop being pulled to you
So I'll stay on the sidelines
watching you from afar, you gaurdian in the dark
I'll never look at anyone, the way i look at you
I'll never want anyone, the way i want you
If i can't have anything else, just give me this one request

(chorusx3)
Just one night
Is all i ask
Just you and me no one else
Your hand in mine
Just one night
So i can look upoon you, and forget the world
Hold you close in a dance
For just one night
I wanna hear your voice fill the night, like the owls do
just you and me for one night
just one...niiight
(chorus end)

this is not bad at all man! emotive and dramatic at the same time. apart from the minor spelling errors and some big mouthful sentence's it has its flo and it's meaning. good job. keep it up.