burn my dreams - comments pleaze

Burn my dreams

I fell asleep
And I let down my guard
When I saw your face

At the mercy of your kiss
The walls I built around my heart
All came tumbling down

On the wings of dreams
You made me rise
Only to fall again

Chorus

If I could, I’d burn my dreams
Let them burn, burn in flames
Watch it all go up in smoke
So when I awake
There’ll be no heartache

I awoke
With a broken heart
I reached out and you were gone

At the mercy of reality
I must’ve cried a thousand tears
As I gave in to my fears

On the wings of dreams
You made me rise
Only to fall again

Repeat chorus till fade

© 2012

You express your frustration well. It is so hard to have someone in your mind and not have her in your arms.

I agree with Jim.

You made me rise
Only to fall again

I like this, very good song.

Thanks any suggestions to improve the song?

Thanks, i've been looking for some of your material but haven't found any yet.