Game Over

Game over

I’m not gonna lie
Love made me turn a blind eye
Every time you crossed the line

But I’m seeing clearly now
You always had to be the star of the show
You never wanted me to shine

You kept me dancing to your tune
But now the music’s stopped
And my feet won’t move for you no more

Chorus

Its game over
Baby game over
If you gave me the time of day
If you never played me that way
We wouldn’t be here today
Its game over
Baby game over

I thought we were a team
I played the game
So we both could win

But then you chose to take me on
In front of friends
You tried to bring me down

You pushed my buttons
You broke every rule
And like a fool
I forgave you time and time again

This time I’m not giving in
I’m not about to take your call
You should have kept your eye on the ball

Repeat chorus

© 2012

Wow. This song is surprisingly similar to the one I wrote, so similar that my song even has the same title. I must say that I really like the lyrics, mostly because I can completely relate to this.

Thanks man i checked yours out too and i agrea

It is a touching song and has a story to it
Good job man

Thanks

Always love your choruses.Only thing I could suggest,is try to make the rhythm and rhymes tighter.Maybe edit out some unnecessary words whenever possible to make the flow better.Hey,just my opinion,everybody's got one,but since you like some of my stuff,I thought I'd try to shoot you my take on what your writing!Keep on Rocking your tunes,I'll keep on reading them.Doug
My comment applies to the verses only!!!!!

Advice much appreciated..thanks