made a rap pretty crap but would like input( much needed !!!! )

Thread: made a rap pretty crap but would like input( much needed !!!! )

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  1. mrdveed said: 05-27-2012 03:20 PM

    Default made a rap pretty crap but would like input( much needed !!!! )

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  2. Toasted Wonderbread said: 05-30-2012 04:43 PM

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    I don't understand the first part. What do they make you do? Instead of just repeating that as the chorus why not explain more what goes on in your personal life. You are right with your first line, the world does not know you, show us who you are by telling us what you go through and how you overcome it.