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Model behavior
Means fashionably late
Overlooked,overbooked
Have to look great
Interviews,designer shoes
Pictures of your face
Every girl's a rival
Waiting to take your place

Chat shows,in the morning
Then Playboy magazine
Party with Paris Hilton
Got to make the scene
Model behavior
Is getting the best of you
You're a Supermodel
Better think it thru

On the go,fashion shows
No time to stop
Photo opps. about to drop
It's time to cop
Movie stars,limo cars
Then celebrate
Overpaid,getting laid
Ain't life great. 08/2006.

This is really clever and has a nice flow

Overpaid,getting laid
Ain't life great.

A cool way to end it.

I wish it was me;overpaid,getting laid.Dream on.......

Yeh, I'm a PG/PG-13-kind of person. (Comment from another thread)
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Doug, what I like about this poem/song is the perspective. Observing the situation, behavior, with a simple terse comment here and there to give direction to a wayward one. The fullness of the glitz shows the emptiness of the life. Thanks, you're right. I like it. . . . Why leave it for someone else to steal? Put YOUR music to it. This may be a 21st century hit, cuz there are plenty of those girls on every TV "magazine" show! And they start younger and younger...

Haha I love this! I have a theory way some posts get more views than others, I think it has to do with the tittle or words in the poem or song so if the word is a highly searched word then you will get a lot of views.

Johnb31, interesting theory! "Search" never works well for me on ATL, though . . . :S

Originally Posted by Frankie Jasmine

Johnb31, interesting theory! "Search" never works well for me on ATL, though . . . :S

I think John means Google search JF not ATL search. If you look down to the bottom of the main ATL forum page, you can see who is online, and guests frequently outnumber members 100 to 1. The "guests" are usually crawl spiderbots from China, and this is why some posters complain that they have received a lot of views but no comments, and this is down to the fact that the views are not from ATL members.

I really liked this, great work. Overpaid, getting laid, I'd settle for either one

Originally Posted by Debeaux

I really liked this, great work. Overpaid, getting laid, I'd settle for either one

Thanks!