Barely Alive

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  1. Johnb31's Avatar

    Johnb31 said:

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    I feel so alone
    With you by my side
    I can’t explain
    This inner fight

    It’s hard to see
    The look in your eyes
    It’s hard to believe
    That I was once in the crevice of your mind
    “Chorus”
    Am I dreaming?
    Or am I alive
    Caught in a trance
    With no exit sign
    Am I dreaming?
    Holding on to life
    By the thinnest relation
    I’m barely alive

    Well it's time to say
    Our last goodbyes
    And rid our selves
    Of these lies

    I'm gonna sail away
    Into another place
    On a boat that I carved
    Out of your disgrace

    I'll sail away in my dreams
    And leave behind all these things
    I will run away
    From this world beneath my feet
    And sail across the open sea
    Searching for something to believe
    Chorus”
    Am I dreaming?
    Or am I alive
    Caught in a trance
    With no exit sign
    Am I dreaming?
    Holding on to life
    By the thinnest relation
    I’m barely alive

    Can you hear me now?
    Can you hear the sound?
    Of my heart bleeding out
    I'm dreaming out loud

    I'm holding on to the seams
    That rip and cause me to bleed
    This ocean floats me away
    Into a motion of constant sway

    Everything is breaking
    Right in front of me
    With nothing more
    Than my life of insecurity

    It's time that I wake up
    And reset the clock
    I'm tired of living in a dream
    Time to finally be me
    Chorus”
    Am I dreaming?
    Or am I alive
    Caught in a trance
    With no exit sign
    Am I dreaming?
    Holding on to life
    By the thinnest relation
    I’m barely alive
    Am I dreaming?
    Am I dreaming?
    Tonight
    With you by my side
    Or is this just my life
    I'm barely alive
    I'm barely alive
    ..............(pause)
    It's time to wake up
    Last edited by Johnb31; 08-10-2012 at 03:53 PM.
     
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    Doug Denslowe said:

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    I guess I spoke too soon!(about my Message to you)This is REALLY GOOD!!!It sings/rocks right off the page.I've had Writers Block lately,I wish I could have written this.Man,Im blown away.Too cool for School!!!Keep up the great work,this rocks,big time!Super chorus,I love this song!If I had a band,I'd be proud to play this.Good job!Re:your reply below this;Let me know if you do record it with your band,love to hear it.
    Last edited by Doug Denslowe; 07-04-2012 at 04:49 AM.
     
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    Johnb31 said:

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    Thanks man I really like this one too I hope I can play this one with my band one day.