Forever Lies

You
Describe everything to me
Of how you use to be
Are you living or are you a dream
Do you feel like me?
Caught in a world of no reality
Full of holes
And abnormality
Oh do you feel like me
"Chorus”
Oh do you watch the world
Go passing by
Or do you watch the stars that cease to shine
Do you feel the pain that forever lies?
With in your mind

It forever lies
“Verse 2”
You
Got the whole world by your side
There’s not a place where you can't hide
Cause you got your disguise
It's in your mind
It passes by
You
Make me see right through
The pain inside protrudes
The disguise in which you choose
It's here with you
“Bridge”
Oh do you feel the pain so deep inside
As it wisps you away for life
Can you understand the pain?
So deep inside
It forever lies
It forever lies
It forever lies
Do you feel like me?
Do you feel like me?
Oh do you watch the whole world go
Passing by
Can you see the deception shrouded over in your mind?
Can you understand that there’s a reason why
A reason to live this life
“Chorus”
Oh do you watch the world go passing by
Or do you watch the stars that cease to shine
Do you feel the pain that forever lies?
With in your mind
It forever lies
It forever lies
It forever lies
“Ending”
You
Describe everything to me
Of how you use to be
Are you living or are you a dream
Do you feel like me?
Caught in a world of no reality
Full of holes and abnormality
Oh do you feel like me

Do you feel like me…… like me

First song I ever wrote lyrics and music. It was crafted from the pain of a friend of mine, and I hope that it helps others as well.

I think it's really great!! This may be the first time that i have actually written a response to someone's lyric or poetry and that's because this is a totally together piece of writing. Lines like full of holes and abnormality, not repetitive, very metaphoric, that kind of stuff really makes it take off. Love it!

I just got thru watching,"God Bless Ozzy Osbourne"and could hear him sing this song.Once again,good job.I wish you would have given the reader/viewer of these song lyrics what you had in mind,musically.I assume heavy metalish,but that's just a guess.Give us more to go on,brother!You Rock,don't stop.

Its kind of a slow song that gets mildly heavy at the bridge and stays that way until the ending which is slow.

Check this song out at http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GSFLs...&feature=g-upl let me know what you think.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GSFLsK85dKo
Link to this song on my you tube