Short song, should be expanding soon. Looking for some reviews !!

Thread: Short song, should be expanding soon. Looking for some reviews !!

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  1. Jut32169 said:

    Default Short song, should be expanding soon. Looking for some reviews !!

    Here I sit at the oceans floor
    Like a sunken ship waiting to be explored
    This pressure is nothing but a relentless attack
    Trying to erode all that I have built
    I'm here now with hopes this water might just evaporate
    But I've been known best for the things I exaggerate*
     
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    Doug Denslowe said:

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    I really like the first two lines and the last two lines.(Rhymes)So far,so good.Looking to what you come up with next!