I think it's time to lay this down
I'll start with my disgust for the people in this town
So please don't think I'm just another fool
I'll have you figured out
There's no doubt, what I think about
In my mind your just another
Spare yourself before you slip right under
Take back every lie*
About how you hunk I'm a genuine guy
When you can't even bare to look yourself in the mirror
Your red eyes, they are possessed*
And the beating heart inside my chest
Is not some novelty to play
And forget about when your with him the very next day
A spitting image of everything I fear*
Is laced inside your skin
It's pale white and fragile just like porcelain*
For I'll always stay on top of this shelf
While you fall to the floor
Your just about as fake as the mannequin outside the door
Plastic hands that move to the beat of unworthy lust
I could blow you away easier then that dust
That fills this empty room
I will laugh at everything you've become
I think it's my time to look around
I'll start with what happened when I found
The pieces of what you forgot to pick up
When you decided to try and be abrupt
I'll have this torn apart
You disgust me like it's an art
A spitting image of everything I fear*
Is laced inside your skin
It's pale white and fragile just like porcelain*
For I'll always stay on top of this shelf
While you fall to the floor
Your just about as fake as the mannequin outside the door
Plastic hands that move to the beat of unworthy lust
I could blow you away easier then that dust
That fills this empty room
I will laugh at everything you've become
I will never get you
And I'm starting to regret that I even tried
Thinking I could change you from the inside
Do you run off of empty bottles of your own disgust?
Drinking away all of what you can't trust
My faith for you has already been discussed*
Save it for someone else
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Great rhymes.Only thing I'd suggest,is try to put commas in the verses,to make the rhythm easier to understand!!!<Got it??
It seems almost everybody(me included) write nothing but heartbreak on this site.I know there are exceptions(Showdow Heat)but there is a lot of people who were or are in pain.Good work,you're a contender!Love those *****Last edited by Doug Denslowe; 07-27-2012 at 01:21 PM. Reason: ****** Comment