Goodbye old past

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  1. mc2011 said:

    Default Goodbye old past

    Every place seems thick with fog
    Every destination is not near
    I hold my hand out for direction
    But things remain unclear
    The grass grows greener there
    At least that's what I hear
    Goodbye old future
    Good day old past

    I see the empty warehouse
    And I long to be there
    Am stuck on a crowded train
    And I've already paid my fare
    It's a fallacy it's moving forward
    It's driving me to despair
    Goodbye old future
    Good day old past

    I've turned deaf to the tarmac melody
    Where the crowds still rule
    Over the two delusional buildings
    That stand so tall
    I've no need to search for proof
    It turned me to a fool
    Goodbye old future
    Good day old past

    The glass is empty now
    And I am feeling drenched
    And it didn't have courtesy
    To leave my thirst quenched
    I'm leaving this behind
    To go where I'll be unfenced
    Goodbye old future
    Good day old past

    The leaves are turning brown
    And the forrest is in touch
    And there has been nothing
    I've wanted so much
    To have all my dreams
    Still within my clutch
    Goodbye old future
    Good day old past

    I must now leave the train
    And I must start anew
    And though the world has lied
    It can still be true
    In this simple hesitation
    You manage to undo
    Goodbye old future
    Good day old past

    Any feedback would be helpful
     
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    Doug Denslowe said:

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    You got a natural gift for writing,don't let anybody tell you different.Your style is unnique and yours alone.Usually,when I see Lyrics that aren't strictly "rhyming" I tend to read them fast or skip over them.These words really "got"me!Execellent work,if I do say so myself!It's,to me,Neil Youngish,and it don't get much better than that!
    Last edited by Doug Denslowe; 05-02-2013 at 01:47 AM.
     

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