I tried, you failed

This is about when you put so much effort in to making someone happy and not being appreciated or treated with similar respect

Id do everything u asked*
Hating what I had to do
I just couldn't quite say no*
All for some*love from you

Then you'd tell me I was a wreck
Having done all that*I could*
Id try so hard to make you smile
Even thou I knew you never would*

I had about enough*
Stayed when most would bail
The fact is I tried,
You failed*

You started out so keen
We seemed to grow really close*
Then you did the thing you knew*
Would make me hurt the most*

I had about enough*
Stayed when most would bail
The fact is I tried,
You failed*
*
Behind my back with my friend
Thats just seems to be my luck
You beg me not to go*
But now I'm getting down from your hook*

Now where over and I'm free*
To be who I want to be*
To see who i want to see*
And start to live life happily*

I had about enough*
Stayed when most would bail
The fact is I tried
You failed

TrueP.,I don't know how I overlooked this.This is something we all go through,heartbreak.When you can write about it,it's not as bad as those who simply stew or implode.I have to suggest something in the second stanza;"Even thou"has got to go!Just my opinion,but they are unnecessary.Take it or leave it,up to you.Either way,great little piece!

thanks bud and about the stanza thing is it another less is more sort of thing lol seems to be my problem thanks for the help

I hear this as a very heavy rock song--am I correct? . . .

You are indeed with this song
Im gunna rock out to it

AwRrrrright!!

haha