Nice short one. This is something i truely believe this little planet of ours needs more of
When your heart feel broke
your on the slippery slope
The demon inside has awoke
It's time to give into hope
When your in your Lowest hour
And there is nothing left to lose
You will show your true power
And loosen of the noose
When your living in this wonderful world
Its hard to see beauty surround your heart
So let hope find it's way in
And tear the darkness apart
When your hope has departed this life
And there is no sign of the Divine
Come and seek me out
And I will share with you mine
In the mouth of the lion is an antelope
Screaming out it's lungs
Help may not come
But still it holds onto hope
When your living in this wonderful world
Its hard to see beauty surround your heart
So let hope find it's way in
And tear the darkness apart
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Last edited by trueperfectionisimperfect; 09-25-2012 at 10:41 AM.
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Great stuff man. I really like the quickness and abrupt ending of the chorus. Or what I think is the chorus.
'When your living in this wonderful world
Its hard to see beauty surround your heart
So let hope find it's way in
And tear the darkness apart'
Really stuck with me. Good job!We're a little bit stranger on the inside -
It is marvellous!
"Gilgamesh, where are you hurrying to?
You will never find that life for which you are looking.
When the gods created man they allotted to him death,
but life they retained in their own keeping" -
Yer that was the chorus and thank you glad you both enjoyed it
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Good rhymes,good lyrics.
