Don't leave me back in the black

Today, i wrote another new song, "don't leave me back in the black". Please post your comments / suggestions about this song here, I wrote it with my full heart.
And everything in () will be sang by a background-singer or something like that. ^^

Thanks a lot in advance!
And please report any english errors, cause i'm 15 and i'm living in germany so my english is not that good.^^



Don't leave me in the black

When we were together
walking down the road
i was praying that you won't see anyone*else but just me
You can't let me be alone
Cause you know that i can't handle it

When you are talking to me
your eyes are searching for someone else
but not for me
Babe i know that i'm not your good
but you can't do this to me


We survive this world with pain
Please don't go back to him
don't leave me alone in the black
or every weekend guess what
i would sit in the dark
to wait for someone babe
but i can't expect that from you
no babe
(no no)
don't leave me back in the black

There is no excuse for you babe
don't come back if you just need me
i lost my soul in your brain
and you can't give it back
now i said nothing but just a smilie
it's too late to show your love
can't i live in my world
the world i went through
is too
(too too)
hard


When you are talking to me
your eyes are searching for someone else
but not for me
Babe i know that i'm not your good
but you can't do this to me


We survive this world with pain
Please don't go back to him
don't leave me alone in the black
or every weekend guess what
i would sit in the dark
to wait for someone babe
but i can't expect that from you
no babe
(no no)
don't leave me back in the black

We survive this world with pain
Please don't go back to him
don't leave me alone in the black
or every weekend guess what
i would sit in the dark
to wait for someone babe
but i can't expect that from you
no babe
(no no)
no no no babe
(babe babe)
don't leave me back in the black
don't leave me back in the black
don't leave me back in the black

I REALLY am loving this title and the repition of the it in the song. I can almost hear music in my head when I read this. And the english is pretty good so no worries. good job

thanks a lot!

Very original style.I'm amazed at all the young talent we have around here!You youngsters are blowing me away,keep it up!

Great title...nicely written. Your English came across just fine...

thank you soo much!! )