This is just a quick write down when they come they.come and are forgotten way to.soon if.you don't. I am going to.work with it and post final copy tonight. Hope you all like
Shackles in the silence
Breaking of the chain
No-one though it would
Come like this.
Regret and fear
Never sounded so clear
Turn and run
Never look back
Stop and stare
And you'll be bound to this Hell
Call a home
never look back
On what you left behind
All they are
All they were
Are just forgotten memories
Living within
Always trying
Never succeeding
move on from this place seems like
Forever
Forever in this place
We want nothing more
Except to escape from these memories
never look back
On what you left behind
All they are
All they were
Are just forgotten memories
Living within
Run no one can stop you
Run far from this place
Run no one can stop you
Run far from this place
never look back
On what you left behind
All they are
All they were
Are just forgotten memories
Living within
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Never Look Back
Last edited by Matt6660; 12-25-2012 at 11:10 PM.
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"Never Look Back" has got be the Title of yet another Classic-in-the-Making!Matt you are someone to watch.I,for one,will be!
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Never look back sounds good ill have to agree. Making this one was like the old title if I did not write it down that second it would of been a forgotten memorie. For this one i thought is was an ok cause I criticize my self on everything. This was another one where you had to let me know it was good! Thanks Doug
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Better than good.Two things;"No one" not Noone.(I hate it when people are plugging Herman's Hermits and don't even know it.,)The line "All they where"??????Otherwise,I like this......a lot!
What do you mean with the line,"All they where"??Did you mean "They all were"??I think that makes more sense!Last edited by Doug Denslowe; 12-25-2012 at 08:41 AM. Reason: All they where Comment
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Ya I post on my phone and it messes up a little. I'll fix. Better then good I like the way it sounds lol
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Matt,Rickey gives you some good suggestions/corrections.I concur with him completely!
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Yes Rickey I agree and am not offended. I use my phone and it always messes up what I am typing . I will change that and am.glad you like.it. thanks for the correction.
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Doug I agree with that 100% you know phones these days.
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Lol ya. The auto correct using sweep texting sucks.
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Seriously,love this song and especially the Title!
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thanks Doug glad to hear that. I read over them and still it gets me thinking and its my own work