Never Look Back

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  1. Matt6660 said: 12-23-2012 10:35 AM

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    This is just a quick write down when they come they.come and are forgotten way to.soon if.you don't. I am going to.work with it and post final copy tonight. Hope you all like


    Shackles in the silence
    Breaking of the chain
    No-one though it would
    Come like this.
    Regret and fear
    Never sounded so clear
    Turn and run
    Never look back
    Stop and stare
    And you'll be bound to this Hell
    Call a home

    never look back
    On what you left behind
    All they are
    All they were
    Are just forgotten memories
    Living within

    Always trying
    Never succeeding
    move on from this place seems like
    Forever
    Forever in this place
    We want nothing more
    Except to escape from these memories

    never look back
    On what you left behind
    All they are
    All they were
    Are just forgotten memories
    Living within

    Run no one can stop you
    Run far from this place
    Run no one can stop you
    Run far from this place

    never look back
    On what you left behind
    All they are
    All they were
    Are just forgotten memories
    Living within
    Last edited by Matt6660; 12-25-2012 at 11:10 PM.
     

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    Doug Denslowe said: 12-23-2012 08:22 PM

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    "Never Look Back" has got be the Title of yet another Classic-in-the-Making!Matt you are someone to watch.I,for one,will be!
     

  3. Matt6660 said: 12-23-2012 10:33 PM

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    Never look back sounds good ill have to agree. Making this one was like the old title if I did not write it down that second it would of been a forgotten memorie. For this one i thought is was an ok cause I criticize my self on everything. This was another one where you had to let me know it was good! Thanks Doug
     

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    Doug Denslowe said: 12-24-2012 02:57 PM

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    Better than good.Two things;"No one" not Noone.(I hate it when people are plugging Herman's Hermits and don't even know it.,)The line "All they where"??????Otherwise,I like this......a lot!
    What do you mean with the line,"All they where"??Did you mean "They all were"??I think that makes more sense!
    Last edited by Doug Denslowe; 12-25-2012 at 08:41 AM. Reason: All they where Comment
     

  5. Matt6660 said: 12-24-2012 05:57 PM

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    Ya I post on my phone and it messes up a little. I'll fix. Better then good I like the way it sounds lol
     

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    Doug Denslowe said: 12-25-2012 05:50 PM

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    Matt,Rickey gives you some good suggestions/corrections.I concur with him completely!
     

  7. Matt6660 said: 12-25-2012 11:08 PM

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    Yes Rickey I agree and am not offended. I use my phone and it always messes up what I am typing . I will change that and am.glad you like.it. thanks for the correction.
     

  8. Matt6660 said: 12-25-2012 11:09 PM

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    Doug I agree with that 100% you know phones these days.
     

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    Doug Denslowe said: 12-27-2012 07:24 PM

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    Quote Originally Posted by Matt6660 View Post
    Doug I agree with that 100% you know phones these days.
    Not really,but I'll take your word!
     

  10. Matt6660 said: 12-28-2012 04:46 PM

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    Lol ya. The auto correct using sweep texting sucks.
     

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    Doug Denslowe said: 12-28-2012 04:49 PM

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    Seriously,love this song and especially the Title!
     

  12. Matt6660 said: 12-28-2012 04:52 PM

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    thanks Doug glad to hear that. I read over them and still it gets me thinking and its my own work
     

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