Cycle of Death

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  1. Johnb31's Avatar

    Johnb31 said:

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    Is there a moment?
    In life
    When we see who we are
    Is there a moment in life?
    When we understand
    What happened
    To us
    That we wasted
    Our days
    On things we can’t see
    “Chorus”
    Is there a moment?
    When life comes into frame
    And we realize everything-
    We couldn’t be
    Will we wake up?
    One morning
    And find life
    No longer mourning
    Or will we fall into a cycle
    A cycle of death

    Wars rage on across the seas
    And we are left on our knees
    Begging for the world
    To plead
    But they stand up
    And fight us anyway
    It seems were not as powerful
    As we think
    “Chorus”
    Is there a moment?
    When life comes into frame
    And we realize everything
    We couldn’t be
    Will we wake up?
    One morning
    And find life
    No longer mourning
    Or will we fall into a cycle
    A cycle of death…
    A cycle of death…

    Time to wake up
    And smell the roses
    Time to unplug
    Our stuffy noses
    And take in life
    Through the senses
    Cause were nearing the end…
    Were nearing the end…
    Of the cycle of death…
    The cycle of death…
    “Chorus”
    Is there a moment?
    When life comes into frame
    And we realize everything
    We couldn’t be
    Will we wake up?
    One morning
    And find life
    No longer mourning
    Or will we fall into a cycle
    A cycle of death…
    A cycle of death…
    It’s a cycle
    It’s a cycle
    And were nearing the end
    Last edited by Johnb31; 12-29-2012 at 01:54 PM.
    There is not enough space or time to truly let the song unwind
     
  2. Doug Denslowe's Avatar

    Doug Denslowe said:

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    Beautiful.Nicely said.
     
  3. Johnb31's Avatar

    Johnb31 said:

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    I think this song has potential I think it will be one that I will attempt to perfect. The chorus has amazing flow and sound when I sing it, and it brings me joy. I need to just rewrite the verses a little bit and I think this song will become one of my favorites Ive ever written.
    There is not enough space or time to truly let the song unwind
     
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    Thatsmeonthetrain said:

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    This is one of my favorites out of the many songs you have written. I love the flow and I want to hear it out loud as soon as possible.
     
  5. Jim Colyer's Avatar

    Jim Colyer said:

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    I like the idea. People always talk about life cycles on this planet. But, in reality, death rules!
     
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    Johnb31 said:

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    Yeah let's stop worrying about the weather and bla bla bla because those cycles will always be here we won't though so we need to live everyday of our cycle of live because we never know when the cycle is gonna end.
    There is not enough space or time to truly let the song unwind