Towers

Verse one:
You're my surrender, when I'm falling under.
The tears I shed, are better hid.
You know I'm broken, with each word that's spoken.
You keep me, from losing every part of me.

Chorus:
Each tower that falls, reveals a pain.
And each one that's built won't stay the same.
Each day that's new, haunts my soul.
And each one before, reveals it all.

Verse two:
You're my defense, when I'm so weak.
And you're arms, they captivate me.
You know I'm trying with each step I take.
But I'm dying with every move I make.

Chorus:
Each tower that falls, reveals a pain.
And each one that's built won't stay the same.
Each day that's new, haunts my soul.
And each one before, reveals it all.

Bridge:
These towers, they may fall.
But you'll be there underneath it all.
They crumble, but you pick up the dust.
And with you is the only way I can trust.

Ending Chorus:
Each tower that falls, reveals a pain.
And each one that's built won't stay the same.
Each day that's new, haunts my soul.
And each one before, reveals it all.

Love it,Love it,Love it.Hey,I've got to suggest this(I know you won't use it,but I couldn't help myself!)

The tears I shed,are better hid
You keep me from losing it, and blowing my lid.

Couldn't help going for the rhyme.

Thanks for the feedback!

Hi traingirl!
I'd say this is a true Serenade Of Consolation for a helluva lot of lost souls on this very globe.
Here and there you've skipped the rhyme, but a too smooth rhythm wouldnot reflect the actual feeling you try to put in words.
Therefore: As a singer and composer I would be careful if I want to change anything without asking your permission first.
Thanks again!