Scars

Thread: Scars

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  1. scriftie13 said:

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    okay so i wrote this song called "Scars". i dont know how good it is, please give honest opinions please...

    Looking at myself in the mirror
    Not liking what I see
    Staring at my reflection
    God, why do i look like this? Why me?

    Scars on my face, messed up body figure,
    Hair all over the place, wounds that just won't heal

    Why couldn't God see?
    These scars are never healing
    Im the one no-one wants to be
    Why did God have to chose me?
    Why did it have to be me?

    Look at life out the window
    Happiness here and there
    However life inside me
    I can hardly bare.

    Life clung onto me, now im hardly breathing,
    Someone just let go of me, let this stop what im feeling.

    Why couldn't God see?
    These scars are never healing
    Im the one no-one wants to be
    Why did God have to chose me?
    Why did it have to be me?

    I look up,
    Too far up,
    I take the punch, I take the blow.
    No fight back,
    Im not like that,
    I just cant do this anymore.

    Why couldn't God see?
    These scars are never healing
    Im the one no-one wants to be
    Why did God have to chose me?
    Why did it have to be me?
    Why did it have to be me?

    Honest (but not horrible!) opinons please. Thanks
     
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    Jim Colyer said:

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    I know what you mean. I feel the same way when I look in a mirror. Most scars are inside, however. No use bringing God into it. He probably doesn't exist.
     
  3. Doug Denslowe's Avatar

    Doug Denslowe said:

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    If you look at the bottom of this page to "Similar Threads"you'll see five other Scar Threads on this site alone!Welcome to the Scars Club!