
Scorpions and Butterflies
Thread: Scorpions and Butterflies
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Tomatomic said:
03-30-2013 01:14 PM
Scorpions and Butterflies
feel the sting
then the brush of wings
against your skin..... x3
there are scorpions in your smile
and i wonder how,
i ever did see, the beauty in your
face, then i remember...
You've got something nobody else has
it sets you apart, makes you unique.
this subtle fact made me look back
and realize deep inside... all i ever wanted was you.
venom in veins
and air on your face
a beautiful state...x3
there are butterflies in your eyes
now i can see why,
i was captivated, encapsulated
with your face, then i recall...
There's a darker side to you that terrifies me
you're a sleeping tiger ready to strike
this can't be right
this is my plight
no matter what i do... i cannot escape from you.
feel the sting
then the brush of wings
against your skin
venom in veins
and air on your face
a beautiful state
SCORPIONS!!!
BUTTERFLIES!!!
SCORPIONS!!!
BUTTERFLIES!!!
Last edited by Tomatomic; 03-30-2013 at 03:26 PM.
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LooknGlass said:
03-31-2013 03:27 PM
Good stuff man, very good write. Title drew me in and I wasn't disappointed. Keep up the good work!
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Jim Colyer said:
04-08-2013 09:23 AM
I naturally thought of "O full of scorpions is my mind" from Shakespeare's MacBeth.
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Doug Denslowe said:
04-09-2013 10:12 AM
Two-in-Row!This is another,less angry,more relatable song.Good work Atomic One!
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curiosity_kills_the_cat said:
04-10-2013 02:11 AM
Never-ending metamorphosis...hmm.
"there are scorpions in your smile"(very imaginative)
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amaryn said:
04-18-2013 03:37 PM
Surprising strike: butterflies usually prefer the stomach
I like to be surprised