Two songs together!! These were both written very quickly a few days ago and they were just some rough ideas I had and literally threw together! I've put them both in the same thread because neither have a name (yet) and they're not 'great' but I think I can make something from them, theres definitely some meaning there, just wanted to get some rough opinons from others...

Behind the door
Is a cigarette
And the smoke is telling me lies
Behind your eyes
Is a jealousy
And the envy's turning you green

You couldnt tell me anymore
And now my heart bleeds through the floor
And now you dont want me
You were everything and more
Even though my heart is sore
I couldnt live without you

Behind the door
Is a cigarette
Behind the door
I know
You talk about
Ghosts all the time
Well you talk about
A lie

You couldnt tell me anymore
And now my heart bleeds through the floor
And now you dont want me
You were everything and more
Even though my heart is sore
I couldnt live without you

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I crept beneath the wings of the night
Into the borderline around your tongue
Tonight I'm a victim of lonely
Tonight what will happen to me
Could I ever be forgiven

We were crawling through the streets tonight
Underneath the moon so I could get a sight
Of your smile and your body frame
You were my obsession and you've got yourself to blame
Could I ever be forgiven

My heart lies
With you tonight
Though I'm not sad
I'm with you

I'll take it as an invitation
And you could care for me as well
The blackest skies above our conversation
Oh you could care for me aswell

My heart lies
With you tonight
Though I'm not sad
I'm with you
My heart lies
With you tonight
Though I'm not sad
I'm with you

I crept beneath the wings of the night
Into the borderline around your tongue