I wanna be me

VERSE 1
For so long I wanted,Just to break free
To fly so high,And just be me
To fly above,All the clouds
But instead I drown,Among the crowds

CHORUS
I wanna be free
I wanna be me
To fly so high
And touch the sky
Don't want lies
Just wanna open my eyes
To the world that's here
So all I hear....
Is the pounding,Of what I'm near

VERSE 2
I find a way,Out from this life
Of all out war,And constant strife
I feel no pain,no regret
For what I've done,And what is set

REFRAIN

VERSE 3
Just when I thought life was okay
I...once again lost...my way
Just when I thought I'd ended it all
You knocked me down...You made..me..fall

REFRAINx2

Santana, Young rock artists are often compared to each other. Nothing is more disappointing, disgusting and unrewarding than to be
praised as "the new Justin Bieber" or "the Young Bruce Springsteen" if all you want is just TO BE YOURSELF, own sound, own instrument

If the very end of this song refers to a love affair it turns the song surprisingly in a different direction:
you think you have found the way out of trouble, BUT now something (thrilling??) happened- and you collapsed

I see you leave space for interpretation. That's very xciting!

Nice theme, nice song. Keep going and be welcome. Make sure also to post and see through "Poetry", another thread on the LyricsForum.
Check it out !

Originally Posted by amaryn

Santana, Young rock artists are often compared to each other. Nothing is more disappointing, disgusting and unrewarding than to be
praised as "the new Justin Bieber" or "the Young Bruce Springsteen" if all you want is just TO BE YOURSELF, own sound, own instrument

If the very end of this song refers to a love affair it turns the song surprisingly in a different direction:
you think you have found the way out of trouble, BUT now something (thrilling??) happened- and you collapsed

I see you leave space for interpretation. That's very xciting!

Nice theme, nice song. Keep going and be welcome. Make sure also to post and see through "Poetry", another thread on the LyricsForum.
Check it out !

wow! thanks for the compliment yes i do just want to be myself,no judgement no comparisons! :\ the last verse is very open as i intended it to be for many situations:however in my personal story its to do with life in general,as i thought id found happiness but the dickheads in life knocked me down again all-in-all thanks for the review and use the last verse to suit any situation u want!! p.s i hv other songs such as DREAMS and will b posting a song everyday

Hahaha A song per day is a awfull lot,lol. However, I'd say a good song per week is almost a must if you are stuffed with ideas.
I post here and on Poetry both songs and poems,looooool. Have a look sometimes, will ye?