No Mans Land

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  1. LooknGlass said:

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    Read a disturbing article in a paper and wrote this.


    (Vs.1)
    She looked out the window as the world passed by her
    Couldn't bear to glance in the rear view mirror
    Dee was leaving that troubled life behind

    (Vs.2)
    With each passing mile she was getting much stronger
    Knew there was no threat to her any longer
    Her escape from that hell was well designed

    (Chorus)
    She's goin nowhere
    Anywhere
    Somewhere other than what was there
    She's off to no man's land
    Far from her fathers hands
    She's off to no man's land

    (Vs.3)
    Loved her dear mother but never told her goodbye
    Was just as well, mom believed her fathers lie;
    that Dee was lying to her out of spite

    (Vs.4)
    Having packed her suitcase by the light of the moon
    went out the window to the roof from her room
    with stolen keys drove off into the night

    (Chorus)
    She's goin nowhere
    Anywhere
    Somewhere other than what was there
    She's off to no man's land
    Far from her fathers hands
    She's off to no man's land

    (Bridge)
    Seventeen with ten years of shame
    She thinks all men will be like him
    So she's headed to a no mans land
    To escape the hands of men

    (Chorus)
    She's goin nowhere
    Anywhere
    Somewhere other than what was there
    She's off to no man's land
    Far from fathers hands
    She's off to no man's land



    © L. James Tanner
     
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    Doug Denslowe said:

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    Lookin' ,you always paint well thought out pictures in your writings.This is another one.Now that I've seen your "other" stuff,I'd like you to return to the saloons for your next one!
     
  3. LooknGlass said:

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    Quote Originally Posted by Doug Denslowe View Post
    Lookin' ,you always paint well thought out pictures in your writings.This is another one.Now that I've seen your "other" stuff,I'd like you to return to the saloons for your next one!
    Thanks Doug...lol..nope, I'm working on a bed one now
     
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    Doug Denslowe said:

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    Quote Originally Posted by LooknGlass View Post
    Thanks Doug...lol..nope, I'm working on a bed one now
    Does that mean it takes place in the bedroom?Good choice,if it does!
     
  5. LooknGlass said:

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    Quote Originally Posted by Doug Denslowe View Post
    Does that mean it takes place in the bedroom?Good choice,if it does!
    Well, I am just gettn ready to post another just for fun booze one with a tad of bedroom.
     
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    amaryn said:

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    I just wrote "Have You Seen The Child" on my poetry thread, LooknGlass, which- without expressing it as clearly- handled the same thing.
    It shows, how themes can be written in a 1000 different ways. However sad it is, it's good to Face The Facts.
    Thanks for this one!
     
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    Doug Denslowe said:

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    Needless to say I love you "New Song"!!I'm just glad you're writing stuff that's both good lyrically but has a sense of humor as well!My style to the "T"!!