Never Slowing Down

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  1. RockinRustle said:

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    I've got five bucks in my pocket and a full tank of gas
    I've got a whole lotta love not a whole lotta cash
    so baby let's just drive til the needle hits E
    and we break down
    in a little one horse town
    somewhere in Tennessee

    we'll make us a life robbing those trains
    a life of crime to cover up the shame
    we'll drink us the whiskey we'll smoke the cigars
    get tossed into prison and tossed out of bars

    and we ain't ever
    we ain't ever slowing down
    and there ain't nothing
    ain't nothing that can slow us down

    a one night stand a showe cotgun blast a knife in the back
    i'm running for the hills because i'm under attack
    I never thought you'd be the one to sell me out
    but you're a two faced liar sleeping with the choir
    well practiced no doubt

    and we ain't ever
    we ain't ever slowing down
    and there ain't nothing
    ain't nothing that can slow us down

    we could have been like john and june together til the end
    but woman i'm a drifter you're a fair weather friend
    just another blackout night that I can't remember
    your eyes shine of august, but your heart beats December

    and we ain't ever
    we ain't ever slowing down
    and there ain't nothing
    ain't nothing that can slow us down
    yea we ain't ever
    we ain't ever slowing down
    as i'm headed to prison
    you're buried in the ground
     
  2. Doug Denslowe's Avatar

    Doug Denslowe said:

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    I'd consider either putting commas in or cutting your lines in half.Your verses are quite a mouthful,but they're good nonetheless.Also try to rhyme more often,that's easier to "hear"while reading your lyrics.
     
  3. Jim Colyer's Avatar

    Jim Colyer said:

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    I like this. You're a good writer.